Experiment with Story

David (Norway)

My writing experiment:

'Interviewer: What has been the happiest moment of your life?
Juan: When she came into my life. She broke into my heart and made me realize that I could live without evil. I love her. I am a new person. I am in prison but free. A tattoo covers his right forearm. His left-hand clutches two bibles. On his shoulders hangs the bag in which he carries the plates, bowls, cups, and cutlery to keep them from being stolen. Juan has spent five years in prison with seven to pay. He is 24 years old, a lean five-footer.
Five months before our conversation, he met his wife, who introduced him to Christianity. Before that, his life was a net of violence.'